2015高考英語作文點評及詳細解析（新課標II卷）

今年全國新課標I卷高考英語作文的題目為：

假定你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過重陽節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival），請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀請她一同前往，內容包括：

1、出發(fā)及返回時間

2、活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等

“邀請信”“告知信”等應用文題目，需要考生們掌握“建議”、“請求”、“感謝”等功能性語句。書信體作文可用到“書信三段論”，需要注意的是中間過渡段的用詞以及避免不必要的語法錯誤。

根據(jù)題目要求以及我們上面提到的注意點，列出提綱：

第一段：問候+輝式自我介紹+輝式寫信背景（去敬老院）+輝式寫信目的（邀請同去）

第二段：主題句+輝式拓展句1（出發(fā)及返回時間）+輝式拓展句2（活動，such as……）

第三段：我希望（你也能去）。我相信（你會喜歡這個活動）。感謝你（讀我的信）。請回信（告訴我你的決定）。

【老師范文】

Dear Lucy,

How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and enrich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.

Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at 8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision.

Best wishes,

Yours,

LiHua

來源：新東方在線